Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Haiku

Haiku (俳句 ,haikai verse?) listen Japanese haiku have been traditionally composed in 5-7-5 syllables. When poets started writing English haiku in the 1950's, they adopted this 5-7-5 form, thinking it created a similar condition for English-language haiku. This style is what is generally considered "traditional" English haiku. It was found that more could be "said" using 17 syllables in the English language as compared to Japanese, so sometimes English authors choose to use fewer syllables. In Japanese, haiku are traditionally printed in a single vertical line, while haiku in English usually appear in three lines. Haiku was given its current name by the Japanese writer Masaoka Shiki at the end of the 19th century.

This link takes you to the author, Jacqueline Woodson, who talks about and reads a haiku from her book "Locomotion". We will be using this book in our study of word choice.
http://www.teachingbooks.net/show.cgi?m=content%2FFlash%2FWoodson_Locomotion_regular.flv&poster=content%2FFlash%2FWoodson_Locomotion_poster.jpg&t=swf&size=l

Here are a few examples of Haiku poetry written by children from around the world.

In early morning
My Dad goes out for seafood
From the ocean rocks
Agnes Thomas / Age 13 / Canada

In the evening twilight
Only the mushrooms
Are illuminated
Keji Baba / Age 12 / Japan

Here are a few famous examles of Haiku poetry:

An old silent pond...
A frog jumps into the pond,
splash! Silence again.
by Basho (1644-1694)

Over the wintry
forest, winds howl in rage
with no leaves to blow.
by Soseki (1275-1351)

I think the great thing about Haiku is that it makes poetry seem like something everyone could try.

What do you think? Can you come up with a Haiku to share?

65 comments:

  1. I lose sanity,
    Then, suddenly, I find it,
    In my children's smiles.
    by Mrs. Start

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  2. I cross kids quick time
    I pull it in a kids face
    I shot a buzzer

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  3. "I run trough the night

    darkness will fill the night air

    I can see no light."


    Danny,72

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  4. My name is eh kler

    I am soccer the soccer

    I'm good at soccer
    by eh kler

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  5. "Fears are a problem

    they affect your life the most

    there a way of life."


    by:Danny,72

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  6. Love-
    As the sunlight dims
    I say somthing nice and sweet
    And she smiles and winks
    -Mykel

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  7. My name is eh kler

    I am the soccer player

    I'm good at soccer

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  8. Mom-
    My mom is the best
    She gave me birth late at night
    And I love her so
    -Mykel

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  9. I Eat The Rainbows
    It Is Very Colorful
    Who Likes The Rainbows?
    From Korral

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  10. "The four elements

    fire water wind and earth

    the four elements."


    by:Danny 72

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  11. Yuong roses are red
    Tiny sweet violets are blue
    How about tulips?
    -Webanswer

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  12. basketball is fun

    I love basketbal it is fun

    basketball is cool

    by:Tishauna

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  13. that was a good one patrick =)

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  14. omg thats so funny oneil your one funny guyy

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  15. Don't care about schools
    Don't care about stupid work
    What about future?
    -Nerd Brain

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  16. Music
    I like real music,
    I always like to dance and sing,
    It makes me happy!
    Patrick

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  17. CCCCCCCCCOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL

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  18. SNAKES ARE REALY COOL

    I WANT TO HAVE EPT SNAKE

    SNAKES ARE DISGUSTING

    BY:TISHAUNA

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  19. I DISLIKE SPIDERS

    ALL SPIDERS HAVE EIGHT LEGS TOO

    SPIDERS ARE CREPY

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  20. YOU ARE NOT A GIRL

    I JUST WANA HAVE A FRIEND

    NOW I HAVE FRIENDS YAYYYYYYY

    by:ANONYMOUS

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  21. I LIKE TO EAT LOTS

    FOOD IS GOOD BUT YOU ARE FAT

    LETS EAT SOM MORE FOOD

    by:ANONYMOUS

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  22. Thatz So Mean LLOLL

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  23. Hi im writing a haiku

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  24. HAIKU HEART
    5 My soul is so gone
    7 My heart is broken to piece
    5 No use of living

    By:kendy oh ya i rock
    My haiku is the best

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  25. explotins are fun

    and a huge rocky dust

    it is a big bang

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  26. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha





    im awsome

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  27. Happy Mothers day 72
    -Mykel

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  28. The darkness fills me
    All I see is twilight, yo
    You just saw me cry.

    -Class 73

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  29. summer is the best
    sand castles are being built
    ice cream is melting
    by jenny

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  30. flowers are blooming
    raining colours sun shining
    squirrels are awakened
    by jenny

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  31. leaves are colourfull
    bears are tired and cranky
    leaves are ready to fall
    by jenny

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  32. A small piece of you.

    It is all that you left me.

    Words saying ' good-bye '.

    -Sierra. (: 73.

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  33. snow is falling down
    children are playing in snow
    icicles sparkling
    by jenny

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  34. And when you said that.

    You were leaving me alone.

    All of me died.

    -Sierra. (: 73.

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  35. haaaaaaaaaaaaaa haaaaaaaaaaa

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  36. Why did you leave me..

    I can't let you go away.

    I need you with me.

    - Sierra. (: 73.

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  37. haahaa.. It isnt funny?

    -Sierra.

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  38. As the night fills up

    I see myself wandering

    Darkness fills my heart

    -Vickie

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  39. I miss them so much.
    I can't see them anymore.
    Give them back to me.

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  40. I have a big zit
    it looks really hideous
    it smells like garbage

    -Quang

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  41. Spring
    Spring is here today
    and gone tomorrow,like rain
    so where did spring go?

    -Casey

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  42. Baseball

    Baseball is cool and
    your not cool enough to play
    remember baseball

    -Casey

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  43. round and round you go

    where you stop no body nose

    except for shirwa

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  44. Rainbows are are alright
    The pot 'O' Gold is better
    Icecream is awesome


    Baii Lisa 73

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  45. I come to the store

    Would you care for a biscuit?

    No thanks I had lunch

    ~malcolm

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  46. Walking in the night
    fear of vampires and bats
    should i live or die?

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  47. Glasses

    Glasses are awesome
    but your not awesome enough
    to wear glasses yo

    -Casey

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  48. I love chocolate

    Its the other part of me

    Will you marry me? <3 (lol)

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  49. I cook my chicken,

    in a pot of hot water,

    I hear it boil.

    ~Eric

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  50. the water is wet
    the grass is wavy windy
    the fire is hot




    -jessie ^-^







    -jessie

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  51. POW

    i love to say pow
    pow is good for you tonight
    say pow everyday

    -Leila

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  52. You just have to go

    My heart lays here with out you

    I'll rip your heart out

    ~Andrew~

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  53. Cats are very cute

    They are so soft and furry

    I love cats alot!!!!!!!!!

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  54. Germany
    It is for germans

    They only speak german there

    It beats canada.

    - Charles

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  55. I see myself fall
    I can feel myself dying
    Am i falling fast?


    ~SHAY~

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  56. I see a monster it is very big and mean it lives in the lake -michael-

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  57. I Hate Evil Clowns

    I Have Clownophobia

    Im A Evil Clown

    -Josh3d W-

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  58. ring ring ring ring ring
    8:00 time for prison
    schools in session

    Marchello

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  59. Left in the dark, all alone.

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