Haiku (俳句 ,haikai verse?) listen Japanese haiku have been traditionally composed in 5-7-5 syllables. When poets started writing English haiku in the 1950's, they adopted this 5-7-5 form, thinking it created a similar condition for English-language haiku. This style is what is generally considered "traditional" English haiku. It was found that more could be "said" using 17 syllables in the English language as compared to Japanese, so sometimes English authors choose to use fewer syllables. In Japanese, haiku are traditionally printed in a single vertical line, while haiku in English usually appear in three lines. Haiku was given its current name by the Japanese writer Masaoka Shiki at the end of the 19th century.
This link takes you to the author, Jacqueline Woodson, who talks about and reads a haiku from her book "Locomotion". We will be using this book in our study of word choice.
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Here are a few examples of Haiku poetry written by children from around the world.
In early morning
My Dad goes out for seafood
From the ocean rocks
Agnes Thomas / Age 13 / Canada
In the evening twilight
Only the mushrooms
Are illuminated
Keji Baba / Age 12 / Japan
Here are a few famous examles of Haiku poetry:
An old silent pond...
A frog jumps into the pond,
splash! Silence again.
by Basho (1644-1694)
Over the wintry
forest, winds howl in rage
with no leaves to blow.
by Soseki (1275-1351)
I think the great thing about Haiku is that it makes poetry seem like something everyone could try.
What do you think? Can you come up with a Haiku to share?
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I lose sanity,
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In my children's smiles.
by Mrs. Start
I cross kids quick time
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I shot a buzzer
ps by oneil
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Danny,72
funny oneil
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"Fears are a problem
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there a way of life."
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Love-
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I say somthing nice and sweet
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-Mykel
My name is eh kler
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I'm good at soccer
Mom-
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She gave me birth late at night
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-Mykel
I Eat The Rainbows
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Who Likes The Rainbows?
From Korral
"The four elements
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the four elements."
by:Danny 72
Yuong roses are red
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How about tulips?
-Webanswer
basketball is fun
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basketball is cool
by:Tishauna
that was a good one patrick =)
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-Nerd Brain
Music
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I always like to dance and sing,
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Patrick
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SNAKES ARE DISGUSTING
BY:TISHAUNA
I DISLIKE SPIDERS
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SPIDERS ARE CREPY
P.S TISHAUNA
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by:ANONYMOUS
I LIKE TO EAT LOTS
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by:ANONYMOUS
Thatz So Mean LLOLL
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ReplyDeleteHAIKU HEART
ReplyDelete5 My soul is so gone
7 My heart is broken to piece
5 No use of living
By:kendy oh ya i rock
My haiku is the best
I AM AWESOME
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it is a big bang
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Happy Mothers day 72
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The darkness fills me
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You just saw me cry.
-Class 73
summer is the best
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ice cream is melting
by jenny
flowers are blooming
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squirrels are awakened
by jenny
leaves are colourfull
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leaves are ready to fall
by jenny
A small piece of you.
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Words saying ' good-bye '.
-Sierra. (: 73.
snow is falling down
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icicles sparkling
by jenny
And when you said that.
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All of me died.
-Sierra. (: 73.
haaaaaaaaaaaaaa haaaaaaaaaaa
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I need you with me.
- Sierra. (: 73.
haahaa.. It isnt funny?
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As the night fills up
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Darkness fills my heart
-Vickie
I miss them so much.
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Give them back to me.
I have a big zit
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it smells like garbage
-Quang
Spring
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and gone tomorrow,like rain
so where did spring go?
-Casey
Baseball
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your not cool enough to play
remember baseball
-Casey
round and round you go
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except for shirwa
Rainbows are are alright
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Icecream is awesome
Baii Lisa 73
I come to the store
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No thanks I had lunch
~malcolm
Walking in the night
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should i live or die?
Glasses
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but your not awesome enough
to wear glasses yo
-Casey
I love chocolate
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Will you marry me? <3 (lol)
I cook my chicken,
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I hear it boil.
~Eric
the water is wet
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the fire is hot
-jessie ^-^
-jessie
POW
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pow is good for you tonight
say pow everyday
-Leila
You just have to go
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I'll rip your heart out
~Andrew~
Cats are very cute
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I love cats alot!!!!!!!!!
Germany
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They only speak german there
It beats canada.
- Charles
I see myself fall
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Am i falling fast?
~SHAY~
I see a monster it is very big and mean it lives in the lake -michael-
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Im A Evil Clown
-Josh3d W-
lol
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schools in session
Marchello
Left in the dark, all alone.
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